Essay Reflection

Overall on my autobiographical narrative, I think I did pretty well and I am proud of myself. I had a very good introduction which I normally am not good at. I also did well in tying my thoughts with actions which gave more detail to the story. I did a pretty good job in tying in my flashback before my slam dunk. Some things I could do differently is pay attention to my grammar, finish strong with a good conclusion, and be more descriptive. What Ms.Priester can do to make me a better writer is to keep being the great teacher that she is.