1. When I was seven years old I almost died from a serious concussion.
2. When I was six my mom had her first daughter and my first sister.
3. When I was fifteen I found the love my life.
4. When I was eight I won my first spelling bee.
5. When I was five I won my first baseball game.
6. When I was eight I won my first baseball championship.
7. When I was nine I got into the foster system.
8. When I was fourteen I moved to San Pasqual Academy.
9. When I was eight my mom had my youngest sister.
10. When I was seven my favorite dog died.
Wow, number 10 is depressing, and number three is sweet.
ReplyDeleteI agree with number three. Wait that is about me right? haha JK
ReplyDeleteWow Bestfriend I don't think that number 3 is correct, but I think that you should write about it.
ReplyDeleteMarcus, please read and follow directions carefully. Some of the events on your list are missing setting and/or conflict. Proofread your work before publishing.
ReplyDeleteI didnt know you have siblings.
ReplyDeleteI bet when you moved to spa that was the best thing that every happened to you.
ReplyDeletewow mexican i came into foster care at the age of nine too:(- genonna
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